Hi people...This is my classmates...
I dont know everyone, but I want...
I'M "The blond girl" of down.
I wearing a plaid dress...
My name is Carolina Rocha Paes,I'm 22 years old, \Im evagere heigth and a bit chubby. Long, curly blond hair and brown eyes.
My personality is very calm, FRIENDLY, funny, outgoing, smart, helpful, messy, but sometimes I'm very stressed and impolite.
I love wearing dress, miniskirt and tops, I hate jeans. My style is casual, awesome and fantastic....kkkkk
Bye, bye....
PS: I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PINK...THE COLOR...
Oieeeeee
ResponderExcluirHello Carol!
ResponderExcluirYou have to comment your classmates blogs, so they can add you. I didn't have you in my Google Reader. Well, let's see your mistakes, then.
1. "This is my classmates..." PLURAL>>(ThEsE ARE my classmates...)
2. "I dont know everyone, but I want..." (I don't know everyone, but I want TO...)
3. "I'M "The blond girl" of down." (IN THE PICTURE, I'M "The blond girl" WITH KNEES BENT, BESIDES THE TEACHER.)
4. "I wearing a plaid dress..." (I'M wearing a plaid dress...)
5. "Carolina Rocha Paes,I'm 22 years old, \Im evagere heigth and a bit chubby." (Carolina Rocha Paes, I'm 22 years old, I'm AVERAGE heighT and a bit chubby.)
6. "My personality is very calm, FRIENDLY,..." (I HAVE A very calm, FRIENDLY,... ...AND messy personality,...)
Well done! :) My congrats! Keep it up!